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1.   Разместил Ночная Тень   2009-05-18 21:56    

Мне нравится.
Но только одно по моему как-то изменить надо-последнюю строку второго четверостишия.а так прекрасно.

2.   Разместил Анонимный   2009-05-18 22:19    

а мне совсем не нравится, Мураховская

3.   Разместил scalapendra   2009-05-18 23:08    

Не понравилось!

4.   Разместил Марина ЗИМА   2009-05-19 08:12    

постоянно повторяются одни и те же слова.Как то мутно..

5.   Разместил Анонимный   2009-05-19 18:52    

Супер. тема хорошо подобранна. действительно мутновато, но...прекрасно. идеально.

6.   Разместил Shaetan   2009-05-19 20:51    

Не идеально. Тема стара и избита. Рифма хромает. Написано средне.

7.   Разместил ops!O_o   2009-05-20 11:29    

аноним = автор. Убейся.
Не нравится.

8.   Разместил Глаголева Л   2009-05-20 14:20    

Что же так печально?

9.   Разместил Strange   2009-05-27 14:17    

не нравится.да и каким образом вы такое в картинке увидели?

10.   Разместил ReshS   2009-06-06 12:52    

чему-чему,а картинке стих точно не соответствует

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